Level 3 lower C Well written, theory is correct and has some reference to the trailers. To improve however is lacking the detailed examples that explain how the theory is applicable. You need to provide detail as to what is contained in the trailer that would motivate the audiences to be scared/effected/adrenaline etc etc.
Level 3 lower C
ReplyDeleteWell written, theory is correct and has some reference to the trailers.
To improve however is lacking the detailed examples that explain how the theory is applicable.
You need to provide detail as to what is contained in the trailer that would motivate the audiences to be scared/effected/adrenaline etc etc.